Friday, October 3, 2008

420W Journal1

I have to write my graduation thesis in English. This is the reason I chose this course. Actually, I'm not good at writing so I don't like writing in English except when I write letters or send email to my friend. I have to read books to refer for my thesis. The books were written by someone. If they didn't write these books, I can't read them. Ican know about lots of things even it's past events from books. To write something means to pass infomations to other people with letters. It is very important to bring down the informations. We can't tell informations to many people and tell them correctly without some letters. There is a limit of telling them by only a mouth.What writing means to me is to record my research. I'd like people to read my graduation thesis and think about it. I think to write something is one of the occasions that we express what I want to say and what I am. Writing is a good way to be known to people about ourselves. These are the answers about these questions, what writing means to me, what is it, why do I do and what is it for.

3 comments:

Eilidh said...

Thank you for your first journal, Yukino. It is interesting for me to learn a little bit more about you, and about why you are learning English.
try to use some transitions when you write - remember I gave the class a list of common ones this week, and tere are also some in the book. Using transitions helps your writing be more unified and it therefore is easier to read.
I look forward to reading your second journal.
Eilidh

Yangyang said...

Hello,Yuki.I have read your journal.I think it's better than mine,haha.There's a little suggestion for you,I think that you can use more complex or compound-complex sentences.Because these sentences can make your journal more substantial.

Wanting said...

May be you could take communication contacts workshops , You have a lot of chance to take with native speakers.
Wanting Guo